Wednesday, 26 October 2016


                                  FOUND IT



     “I found it!” I yelled. My brother and I had discovered a hidden map in our basement. We tried to find the treasure however we did not find anything. Now we finally found it.



      “Open it!” screamed my brother. He came running to me holding the yellow map.



       We sat down beside the small remarkable chest. I picked it up and held it gingerly. It had no lock, luckily. I opened it slowly. Inside was another map!



        “Seriously,” moaned my brother.



        “Come on, lets go home,” I told him. I was also disappointed, but who knows, where this map will take us. 

       

1 comment:

  1. Great story but you forgot to put the comma after seriously

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